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Valentines Day---Drabble

She was awoken by the smells of chocolate and roses.  Her tousled hair stuck to the pillow as she sat up, rubbed her eyes, and glanced around the bedroom.
"Oh my...god."  Jan whispered to herself.
The room was filled with roses, stuffed animals, boxes of chocolate, and hearts cut out of paper.  The hearts were obviously done by Michael because they weren't even close to even.  Some of them barely resembled hearts at all.
"Good morning buttercup!  Happy Valentines Day!"  Michael called from across the room.
"Michael, where are you?  I can't even see you."
"Oh, I'm sitting behind the giant teddy bear."
She kicked the covers off of her bare legs, and slipped her feet into the fuzzy red heart sippers waiting patiently by her bed.
"Michael, I can barely walk.  You could have at least made a path...or something."  She called in his general direction.
"Sorry.  Uhh, step over the unicorn, pick up the cupid doll, and jump from there to the spot in front of the bear."

5 minutes later, Jan was seated comfortably beside Michael, her back resting against the giant stuffed bear Michael had bought her.
"You really didn't have to do all of this."
"I wanted to.  Plus, I get to help you eat all the chocolate now."
"I never said you could help me eat it all."  She rested her head on his shoulder.  "Thank you.  This means a lot."
"No problemo."

Comments

aww, thanks! (:
Hey Taylor! First of all, congratulations on winning a writing contest...very impressive! So good job on that! :D And second of all..this was so adorable! Great job! And nicely written!

I've seen you around several times so its nice to 'meet' you. It was really nice to see another fic from ya too.

Oh! And my name is Sara. :D
Hi Sara!
Nice to 'meet' you too!
And thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

I plan to be writing a lot from now on, because honestly, dropping off the face of the earth sucks. Its cold and dark and very, very lonely. (:


Awww. So sweet. Nice to meet you and congrats!
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

And nice to meet you too (:
That's very cute :D

and! nice to have you back! I wondered where you were 'cause you didn't post anything on the community :P
thank you!

and yes, i know you were all awaiting my return :P
lol, this is cute Taylor. Glad to have you back. I love his directions to "step over the unicorn". lol
thanks! its good to be back!
and i'm glad you liked it. I didn't spend a whole lot of time on it, but I have a longer piece that should be coming in the next few days (:
Ha! Cute. Michael is so the type to go really overboard on Valentine's Day.
:P thanks.
i wish someone would do that for me! lol.
The hearts were obviously done by Michael because they weren't even close to even. Some of them barely resembled hearts at all.

Awww, he gets an 'A' for effort though, right?

And this:

"Sorry. Uhh, step over the unicorn, pick up the cupid doll, and jump from there to the spot in front of the bear."

That she has to basically undertake an Indiana Jones-like feat just to get to him through all the Valentine's sundries scattered all over the place. Hee hee. ;) This was adorable and nicely done, Taylor. Loved it. And though I've seen you around/am familiar with your writing, I could introduce myself, I suppose. I'm Sky-- nice to have you back writing for us!
Thanks!
Haha, I was back for three days and then I got grounded for missing curfew. But I'm back for awhile. Pinky promise.

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